Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

 

Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

The preliminary exercise is a brilliant opportunity to learn or refresh the basics of filmmaking before creating your actual coursework project.

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW: pov shots, pans and hand held camera.

good opening shot

stalker costume 

villain 

EBI: more research of crime dramas, more details on shot list

faster editing

dialogue recording- no wind
continuinty- need more buildup.

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.

www: variety of shots, clear stalker costume, left on a cliffhanger

ebi: cant hear full dialogue at moments, faster editing.

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

It couldve been more effective. I shouldve followed more crime drama conventions.

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

To make sure its not windy the day i need to record. Learn how to edit faster to increase the momentum of my work.

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors and narrative or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

Yes, i think i will change the narrative. This is becuase i feel as if the cliche stalker chase doesn't fit in with my original plan and should change the segment to my protagonist walking alone cautiously looking behind her.